CRITIQUE | HOW IS MY DRIVING?

[undyingbeliefs]

Let me know how I am doing with Evangeline! If anything seems OOC or even a little off, please give me links to examples and I shall do my best to improve.

Also, as a kind reminder, although anon is on I am more willing to heed the critiques of those honest with who they are. Your critiques are doing me a favor in reassuring me or helping me better the way I RP so please don’t be shy. I promise not to bite. :)

Thank you very much!

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